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I think we cannot discuss the superiority between friend and family relationship and even it is no worth.They are just different kinds of relationship.First,family relationship is a fate. A person cannot choose or abandon people who would be a family.We cannot deny the family relationship itself even if we separate in legal documents on purpose.But It is possible to end a relationship with friends because of some serious reasons.In addition,sometimes blood is thicker than water.There's a common belief that if people face a dangerous situation,most would take care of their family first rather than their friends.Though,friendship is still a necessary relationship because we hardly live only with family.We spend most of time living outside of home such as school or a workplace.So it is important to make friends and keep good friendships.As our family,friends provide us comfortable and warm feelings.Moreover,sometimes there's something to tell my friend which I don't want to tell my family

Good evening [이름]! Happy Wednesday! Advance happy birthday too! I am so happy that you became my student. I totally agree with the things you mentioned below. Family first in terms of emergency situations. Thank you for writing an essay. You did marvelous job! Keep it up! Talk to you tomorrow. Teacher Nina   I think we cannot discuss the superiority between friend and family relationship and even it is no worth. >> Did you mean: I think we cannot discuss about superiority between friends and family because it is not important. They are just different kinds of relationship. >> Correct First,family relationship is a fate. >> Correct A person cannot choose or abandon people who would be a family. >> A person cannot choose or abandon people who are in the family. >> OR: A person cannot choose or abandon people who would be a member of the family. We cannot deny the family relationship itself even if we separate in legal documents on purpose. >> Correct But It is possible to end a relationship with friends because of some serious reasons. >> Correct In addition,sometimes blood is thicker than water. >> Correct There\'s a common belief that if people face a dangerous situation,most would take care of their family first rather than their friends. >> Correct >> OR: There\'s a common belief that if a person face a dangerous situation, most people would take care of their family first rather than their friends. Though,friendship is still a necessary relationship because we hardly live only with family. >> Correct >> OR: Though, friendship is still a necessary relationship because we can\'t live with our family only. We spend most of time living outside of home such as school or a workplace. >> We spend most of the time outside of home such as in school or workplace. So it is important to make friends and keep good friendships. >> So it is important to make friends and keep a good frienship. As our family,friends provide us comfortable and warm feelings. >> Did you mean: Like our family, friends provide us comfort and warm feelings. Moreover,sometimes there\'s something to tell my friend which I don\'t want to tell my family >> Moreover, sometimes there\'s something I can tell my friend which I don\'t want my family to know. >> OR: Moreover, there are times that we can\'t say something to our family but we can to our friends.