8/4 homework

2017-08-17 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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This weekend, read a book or watch a movie that you like and write down at least 8-10 new words from the book or movie. Give the meaning of each and make a sentence using them. <My answer> 1. Once upon a time: a long time ago example)Once upon a time there was a little girl. 2.although:but ex) Although I don't like it. 3.grunt: oink example) Pigs oink noisily. 4.pond: small lake example)I want to go to a pond. 5.patch:area example)Pigs like muddy patch. 6.bit: part example)I live a bit of Earth. 7.colour:colour way example)My favorite colour is white. 8.husk:peel of corn example)I want to remove husk from rice. 9.mill:crush example)I will mill wheat. 10.flour: meal example)I will make cake using rice flour

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Thank you for your going over this. :)

Here are my corrections please go over it.


Teacher Glenda



This weekend, read a book or watch a movie that you like and write down at least 8-10 new words from the book or movie. Give the meaning of each and make a sentence using them.
< My answer>
1. Once upon a time: a long time ago
example)Once upon a time there was a little girl.

>> Correct

2.although:but
ex) Although I don\'t like it.

>> This is an incomplete sentence.

You can say:

>>> Although I don\'t like it, I still ate it.
 3.grunt: oink
example) Pigs oink noisily.

>> Correct
 4.pond: small lake
example)I want to go to a pond.

>> Correct
 5.patch:area
example)Pigs like muddy patch.

>> Correct
 6.bit: part
example)I live a bit of Earth.

>> It would be better to use a different word for this sentence.

For example: My country is a small part of the Earth.

>>> I need a bit of time to relax.

 
 7.colour:colour way
example)My favorite colour is white.

>>  Correct
 8.husk:peel of corn
example)I want to remove husk from rice.

>> I want to remove the husk from the rice.
 9.mill:crush
example)I will mill wheat.

>> Correct
 10.flour: meal
example)I will make cake using rice flour

>> Correct


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