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I enjoy watching soccer which is a very exciting and powerful sport. It is a popular in Korea. My favorite player is Ji Sung Park. He was an excellent player and he helped his team win. He was a member of Manchester United FC. Also he was a captain of my country team. I can't forget World Cup in 2002. He became a famous soccer player after 2002.

Hello [이름]!   You are getting better everyday. Some reminders:1. Use the apostrophe to show possession. To show possession with a singular noun, add an apostrophe plus the letter s. example: country\'s team 2. Articles are before nouns. example: It is a popular sport in Korea.   Teacher Venus^^   I enjoy watching soccer which is a very exciting and powerful sport. >>>CORRECT It is a popular in Korea. >>>It is a popular sport in Korea. My favorite player is Ji Sung Park. >>>CORRECT He was an excellent player and he helped his team win. >>>CORRECT He was a member of Manchester United FC. >>>CORRECT Also he was a captain of my country team. >>>Also he was a captain of my country\'s team. I can\'t forget World Cup in 2002. >>>I can\'t forget the World Cup in 2002. He became a famous soccer player after 2002. >>>CORRECT