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학생이 쓴 원문
What is your favorite color?
My favorite color is black.
Is color important to you?
No.. It's Not important.
Does color affect your emotions?
No... do not affect my feelings.
Which colors do guys usually like more? How about girls?
.... Everybody likes a different color.
If you bought a car, what color would it be?
I want to buy white car
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] cute! Why is it that color doesn\'t affect your feelings? hmmm.. Let us talk about that in our class. I think it is a good topic.. Awesome in your sentence construction! I\'ll see yah!!!
What is your favorite color?My favorite color is black.>>> CORRECT.
Is color important to you?No.. It\'s Not important.>>> CORRECT.
Does color affect your emotions?No... do not affect my feelings.>>> No, it doesn\'t affect my feelings.
Which colors do guys usually like more? How about girls?.... Everybody likes a different color.>>> YOU CAN SAY: Everybody has different taste of color.
If you bought a car, what color would it be?I want to buy white car.
>>> I want to buy a white car. (Don\'t forget your article \"a\")
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