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Hi there Ms. [이름]!

Wow! well said, Ms. [이름]. You did a great job in this composition. You are amazing! Enjoy your weekend date with your daughters and I\'ll see you again on Monday!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

Humm...It is very difficult.

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Actually.. I like money. Ha. Ha. Ha.

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Nowadays, it is very important in our lives.

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So I want to save a lot of money for my future.

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In my country, most parents give their fortune to their children.

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In my case, my parent was very poor and my parent-in-laws was very poor too.

>> In my case, my parents were very poor and my parents-in-law were very poor too.
So I can\'t get their fortune.

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When I become old people with my husband, I want to give my children much money.

>> When my husband and I grow old, I want to give our children a lot of money.
So I want them that they don\'t worry about my husband and me.

>> So I don\'t want them to worry about us.
That is the reason why I save a lot of money and why I like money.

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However I disagree about the topic.

>> However, I disagree with the statement.
Because I don\'t have much money now but I succeed now because I have a kind husband and lovely my children. ^^

>> Because I don\'t have much money now but I am successful because I have a kind husband and lovely children.