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~T. Lynn

Many Korean people prefer to take a subway in the city.

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Because it is very cheap and convenient.

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It is easy to go anywhere in the city by subway.

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However, I am living in the countryside.

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There are no subway so I use to take a bus when I go to the city.

>> There is no subway so I used to ride a bus when I go to the city.
I prefer to live in the city which is an ideal place to get convenient transportation.
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When I was young, I lived in Busan city.

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There were no the subway lines. There were a few bus lines.

>> There were no subway lines. There were a few bus lines.
It was very inconvenient but nowadays there are many subway lines and bus lines.

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It is very convenient, cheap and fast.

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Also we can pay with card when we take the bus and the subway.

>> We can also pay using a card when we take the bus and the subway.
I think that it is the best to use the subway when we want to go somewhere.
>> I think it is best to use the subway when we want to go somewhere.
Once I had to wait a bus in bus station when it was snow.

>> Once I had to wait for a bus in the bus station and it was snowing.
The traffic was so bad so the bus couldn\'t move 1 hours.

>> The traffic was so bad so the bus couldn\'t move for an hour.
So I decided to take a taxi but it was not good way.

>> So I decided to take a taxi but it was not good too.
I still had to wait in the taxi because of the snow.

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So I had to pay very expensive.

>> So I had to pay a very expensive taxi fare.