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Hello, Ms. [이름]!
Well, money is very important, I know that. But we only have one life to live and once we are old we cannot go back to being young. So why don\'t you enjoy life with your family and worry less about money. See you on Monday!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Everybody is so busy. That is life.
>> correct!
After I am adult, I am very tired everyday.
>> After I became an adult, I am very tired everyday.
So I don\'t do activity with my children despite I have free time.
>> So I don\'t do activities with my children in spite of having a free time.
I always first think money before doing it.
>> I always think first about money before doing it.
So can you share me your ideas?
>> correct!
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