8/7 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
[Who is the greatest person you have ever met?]
When I was in Japan, she was my colleague at Kyoto University and Japanese.
She was very small enough to look like a child.
So, when I first met her I was very surprised.
She is very smart and kind.
Although she got married a long time ago, she doesn\'t want to have a baby.
In the meantime, her mind was changed and she became pregnant.
After pregnancy, her life did not change.
However, since her baby was born, her lifestyle has changed a lot.
She got the official vacation for three months and go back home very early even after coming back to school.
I think she lost her career in the academic field.
And it\'s very common in Asian culture.
But it was my illusion.
She published a great paper while her baby was asleep.
It was a little slower than her life before got the baby, however, she was advancing.
I realized that if I have passion, I can get both my family and career at the same time.
강사 첨삭
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-Teacher Jedah
When I was in Japan, she was my colleague at Kyoto University and Japanese.
>>When I was in Japan, I had a Japanese colleague at Kyoto University.
She was very small enough to look like a child.
She was very small enough to look like a child.
>>Correct
So, when I first met her I was very surprised.
So, when I first met her I was very surprised.
>>Correct
She is very smart and kind.
She is very smart and kind.
>>Correct
Although she got married a long time ago, she doesn\'t want to have a baby.
Although she got married a long time ago, she doesn\'t want to have a baby.
>>Correct
In the meantime, her mind was changed and she became pregnant.
In the meantime, her mind was changed and she became pregnant.
>>But, during the course of time, her mind was changed and she became pregnant.
After pregnancy, her life did not change.
After pregnancy, her life did not change.
>>Correct
However, since her baby was born, her lifestyle has changed a lot.
>>Correct
She got the official vacation for three months and go back home very early even after coming back to school.
She got the official vacation for three months and go back home very early even after coming back to school.
>>She got an official leave for three months and goes back home very early even after coming back to work.
I think she lost her career in the academic field.
I think she lost her career in the academic field.
>>Correct
And it\'s very common in Asian culture.
And it\'s very common in Asian culture.
>>Correct
But it was my illusion.
>>But, it was just what I thought.
She published a great paper while her baby was asleep.
She published a great paper while her baby was asleep.
>>While her baby sleeps, she tries to finish he paperwork and was able to published it after.
It was a little slower than her life before got the baby, however, she was advancing.
It was a little slower than her life before got the baby, however, she was advancing.
>>It was a little slower than her life before she had her baby, however, she was still moving forward.
I realized that if I have passion, I can get both my family and career at the same time.
I realized that if I have passion, I can get both my family and career at the same time.
>>Correct
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