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학생이 쓴 원문
I want my children to learn and they become to speak English very well.
So my children started to learn English from they are 9 age.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]!
You know the importance of English so you want your children to learn it early. Your children are very lucky to have a mother like you.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I want my children to learn and they become to speak English very well.
>> I want my children to learn how to speak English very well.
So my children started to learn English from they are 9 age.
>> So my children started learning English at the age of 9.
OR>> So my children started learning English since they were nine years old.
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