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2017-01-26 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

It will be very terrible in my life. I usually don't use the internet but I like watching TV. If I couldn't use them, maybe I would read books. I think that I don't have enough time to read books. Maybe it is the reason why I don't read books. And I will read newspaper. Nowadays many people don't read it because of the internet and TV. Anyway, reading sometings is very the way to us.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!
We have our own likes and dislikes. For you, watching TV is your favorite past time. For me, I could live without TV but I need music so maybe radio or any kind of music player is more important for me. Thank you for making your homework. Your composition is excellent!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
It will be very terrible in my life.
>> It will be very terrible for me.
I usually don\'t use the internet but I like watching TV.
>> correct!
If I couldn\'t use them, maybe I would read books.
>> correct!
I think that I don\'t have enough time to read books.
>> correct!
Maybe it is the reason why I don\'t read books.
>> correct!
And I will read newspaper.
>> And I will read newspapers too.
Nowadays, many people don\'t read it because of the internet and TV.
>> correct!
Anyway, reading sometings is very the way to us.
>> Anyway, reading something is very good for us.

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