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Hello, Ms. [이름]!
My parents are not showy or they don\'t know how to express what they feel. I can\'t remember my father saying I love you to me. I didn\'t understand that when I was young but of course I do now that I\'m old. But you know that it\'s very important for children to show what you feel. A simple thank you, I love you or I\'m sorry will make your relationship with your daughters a lot better.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Sometimes I spoke maliciously to my children after that I regret word but I didn\'t say sorry.
>> Sometimes, I say malicious words to my children. Afterwards, I regret what I said but I didn\'t say sorry.
I don\'t know why I didn\'t say sorry.
>> correct!
I love my children but I don\'t express it.
>> correct!
Despite, my children love me I feel it.
>> Despite that, my children love me. I can feel it.
I will try to say them I love.
>> I will try to say I love you to them.
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