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학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, our personalities happend from our family and life of family.
I sometime surprise that my children's act is same as me.
So I think I have to do carefuly with my words and actions.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]!
Well, where will the children learn from? Of course their parents. after all, you are their first teacher. So they\'ll imitate whatever they hear and see from you.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
In my opinion, our personalities happend from our family and life of family.>> In my opinion, our personalities come from our family and our family life.
I sometime surprise that my children\'s act is same as me.
>> I am sometimes surprise that my children act the same as me.
So I think I have to do carefuly with my words and actions.
So I think I have to do carefuly with my words and actions.
>> So I think I have to do be careful with my words and actions.
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