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2017-06-01 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

"Two heads are better than one" I always discuss with my husband everythings. For example my problems, our future and our children. I don't want to have worry for a long time. It is a good way to discuss a lot of tings with someone.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Ms. [이름]!(\",)

That\'s right! Discussing things with your husband will make the problem clearer and you can come up with the solution quicker.(\",)

Take care!(\",)

~T. Lynn 

\"Two heads are better than one\"

>> correct!
 I always discuss with my husband everythings.

>> I always discuss everything with my husband.
 For example my problems, our future and our children.

>> correct!
 I don\'t want to have worry for a long time.

>> I don\'t want to have to worry for a long time.

OR>> I don\'t like worrying for a long time.
 It is a good way to discuss a lot of things with someone.

>> correct!

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