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When I was young, I lied a lot of things to my parent.
For example breaking the promise, believing me, studying hard and a lot of things.
However I can't keep them because my parent die early.
After I married, I promise again with my family to be happy in the future.
I want to keep this promise.
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When I was young, I lied a lot of things to my parent.
>> When I was young, I lied about a lot of things to my parent.
For example breaking the promise, believing me, studying hard and a lot of things.
>> For example, breaking a promise and believing me that I\'m studying hard and other things.
However I can\'t keep them because my parent die early.
However I can\'t keep them because my parent die early.
>> However, I can\'t keep lying to them because they might die early.
After I married, I promise again with my family to be happy in the future.
After I married, I promise again with my family to be happy in the future.
>> After I got married, I promised my family to be happy in the future.
I want to keep this promise.
>> I want to keep that promise.
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