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2018-02-05 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

When I was young, I could not have my dream because my mother was very poor. I also didn't think about my future. I only didn't want to be poor. But these days I have a lot of things to do. I am a old woman. Number is just number but I don't have enough time to do. After I become a old woman more than now. If I can have enough time. I will spend money for myself.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [이름]!(\",)

Most people think like you. I don\'t have time now so I\'ll do the things I wanna do in the future. Or maybe when I retire, I can have more time for myself. I don\'t wanna scare you but what if that time won\'t come anymore. I mean, we don\'t know when our life will end. When that happens, you\'ll die with much regret. I\'m just saying...

Take care!(\",)

~T. Lynn

When I was young, I could not have my dream because my mother was very poor.

>> correct!
 I also didn\'t think about my future.

>> correct!
 I only didn\'t want to be poor.

>> correct!
 But these days I have a lot of things to do.

>> correct!
 I am a old woman.

>> I am na old woman.
 Number is just number but I don\'t have enough time to do.

>> Age is just a number but I don\'t have enough time to do all the things I want to do.
 After I become a old woman more than now.

>> After I become much older than now.
 If I can have enough time.

>> correct!
 I will spend money for myself.

>> correct!

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