8. 8 Homework

2018-08-09 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

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Answer the question in not less than 5 sentences. - Doctors, nurses and teachers make a great contribution to society and should be paid more than entertainment and sports celebrities. Do you agree or disagree? I don't think entertainment and sports make less contribution to society than doctors, nurses and so on. Doctors and nurses' life will be very boring if there aren't entertainment or sports. We're human being who want to play a game and want to be fun. We're not computers so we can't live only doing someting 'essential'. In that meaning, I think entertainment and sports are essential.

강사 첨삭

Hi, again. ^^

- Blair

I don\'t think entertainment and sports make less contribution to society than doctors, nurses and so on. Doctors and nurses\' life will be very boring if there aren\'t entertainment or sports. We\'re human being who want to play a game and want to be fun. We\'re not computers so we can\'t live only doing someting \'essential\'. In that meaning, I think entertainment and sports are essential.

I don\'t think entertainments and sports make less contribution to society than doctors, nurses and so on. Doctors and nurses lives will be dull if there aren\'t entertainment or sports. We\'re human being who want to play games and have fun. We\'re not computers so we can\'t live only by doing something \"essential.\" In line to that, I think these things are essential.

(So their salary should be higher than doctors and nurses?)

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