8. 8 Homework

2018-08-09 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

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Answer the question in not less than 5 sentences: What can be done to alleviate poverty? In Korea, We were in serious poverty 60 years ago. We have nothing after Korean war. But thesedays, Korea is one of OECD members. The reason we can alleviate poverty was to work hard and study hard. We don't have many natural resources so we should make human resources to make money. The method of making human resources was studying. So even thesedays, many Korean students are suffered by duty of studying.

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- Blair

In Korea, We were in serious poverty 60 years ago. We have nothing after Korean war. But thesedays, Korea is one of OECD members. The reason we can alleviate poverty was to work hard and study hard. We don\'t have many natural resources so we should make human resources to make money. The method of making human resources was studying. So even thesedays, many Korean students are suffered by duty of studying.

In Korea, we were in very serious poverty 60 years ago. We have nothing after the Korean war. But these days, Korea is one of OECD members. The reason why we were able to alleviate poverty was to work hard and study hard. We don\'t have many natural resources so we should make human resources to make money. The method of making human resources was to study. So even these days, many Korean students suffered by duty of studying.

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