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I live on the first floor of the apartment.
>> Correct
There are 3 bedrooms, 2 bathrooms, a kitchen and a big living room.
>> Correct
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>> We have 3 bedrooms, 2 bathrooms, a kitchen and a big living room.
The two bedrooms are my children\'s room.
>> Correct
The last bedroom is mine.
>> Correct
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>> The last bedroom is for me and my husband.
I share the room with husband.
>> I share the room with my husband.
My room is always dark because of the small window.
>> Our room is always dark because it only has a small window.
I want to have a big window.
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>> So, I want to have a bigger window.
I don\'t have bed in my room because sometimes my children sleep with me.
>> We don\'t have a bed in our room because sometimes my children sleep with us.
We usually sleep in the living room.
>> Or we usually sleep in the living room.
We watch drama when we sleep.
>> We watch drama as we sleep.
I have been living here for 16 years.
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I don\'t want to move to another place.
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I live on the first floor of the apartment. We have 3 bedrooms, 2 bathrooms, a kitchen and a big living room. The two bedrooms are my children\'s room and the last bedroom is for me and my husband. Our room is always dark because it only has a small window. So, I want to have a bigger window. We don\'t have a bed in our room because sometimes my children sleep with us. Or we usually sleep in the living room because we watch drama as we sleep. I have been living here for 16 years now and I don\'t want to move to another place.
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