8/9

2011-08-10 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

hi marie In korea, it's too hot to move out house. I sweat a lot so I don't like summer. I have never been to Philippine, but I hope that I get a chance to go there. I don't know about Philippine well,I know just there are many tropical fruits. I like fruit so I hope to visit there and eat many fruits. After our call, I went to market and I bought a Philippine banana! I think that all of the BANANA that sell in Korea is imported from Philippine.

강사 첨삭

Hi Hyunwoo! You did a good job in writing this. You were able to tell me a lot of your ideas. :) I like bananas too, but I prefer watermelon especially when it's hot. I really hope that you can come to our country in the future. Have a nice evening! T. Marie hi marie >>Hi Marie!In korea, it's too hot to move out house. >> In Korea, it's too hot to go out of the house. I sweat a lot so I don't like summer. >> I sweat a lot, so I don't like summer.I have never been to Philippine, but I hope that I get a chance to go there. >> I have never been to the Philippines, but I hope that I get a chance to go there. I don't know about Philippine well,I know just there are many tropical fruits. >> I don't know a lot about the Philippines, I just know that there are many tropical fruits. I like fruit so I hope to visit there and eat many fruits. >> I like fruits so I hope to visit there and eat many fruits.After our call, I went to market and I bought a Philippine banana! >>CorrectI think that all of the BANANA that sell in Korea is imported from Philippine. >> I think that all of the BANANAS that are being sold in Korea are imported from the Philippines.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·