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2017-08-12 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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My name is [Name]. I am a mechanic. I live in London, I have a brother and a sister. My sister is a university student. She studies medicine. She is going to be a doctor. My brother doesn't want to go to university. Because, he wants to be a mechanic like me. He comes and works me in my shop on Sundays. He hasn't finished his education yet. After his education, he is thinking of working with me. We will depart the business together.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Good evening! ^^

Thank you for going over this activity.

I appreciate your effort. :)

Have a great weekend! ^^

Teacher Glenda

My name is [Name]. I am a mechanic.

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I live in London, I have a brother and a sister.

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My sister is a university student. She studies medicine.

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She is going to be a doctor. My brother doesn\'t want to go to university.

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Because, he wants to be a mechanic like me.

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He comes and works me in my shop on Sundays.

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He hasn\'t finished his education yet.

After his education, he is thinking of working with me.

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We will depart the business together.

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