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I remember a professor who I attended her class in my undergraduate course.
Now she already retired and it means her age is over 65.
She is the first woman professor at the department of engineering in Korea.
Although women professors are not rare in engineering college, just a few years ago, \"Glass Ceiling\" was very strong.
When she studied chemical engineering, she was only one woman in the department.
After graduate university in Korea, she went to America for Ph.D.
She came back to Korea and worked hard, even she didn\'t marry.
She has been full of complaints and looked angry at something such as an unfair situation of society or students who don\'t study hard.
And she got married in the 50s and her atmosphere and characteristics were changed absolutely.
She said that she realized the most important things are love and family in life, not work or honor.
And she advised that do not give up the valuable time for meeting good people, marriage, and having family for social honor.
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Hi [이름]! Thank you for this homework. I appreciate the time you put into it! ^^
Thank you for your thoughts too. People are really different. There are old people but think and act like they are young, and vice versa. I think age is just a number, so they say! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I remember a professor who I attended her class in my undergraduate course.
>>I remember a professor who I attended class in my undergraduate course.
Now she already retired and it means her age is over 65.
Now she already retired and it means her age is over 65.
>>Now she is already retired and probably her age is over 65.
She is the first woman professor at the department of engineering in Korea.
She is the first woman professor at the department of engineering in Korea.
>>Correct
Although women professors are not rare in engineering college, just a few years ago, \"Glass Ceiling\" was very strong.
Although women professors are not rare in engineering college, just a few years ago, \"Glass Ceiling\" was very strong.
>>Correct
When she studied chemical engineering, she was only one woman in the department.
When she studied chemical engineering, she was only one woman in the department.
>>Correct
After graduate university in Korea, she went to America for Ph.D.
After graduate university in Korea, she went to America for Ph.D.
>>After she graduated in Korea, she went to America for her Ph.D.
She came back to Korea and worked hard, even she didn\'t marry.
She came back to Korea and worked hard, even she didn\'t marry.
>>Correct
She has been full of complaints and looked angry at something such as an unfair situation of society or students who don\'t study hard.
She has been full of complaints and looked angry at something such as an unfair situation of society or students who don\'t study hard.
>>She had a lot of complaints and is always angry with something like unfair situation in the society or students who don\'t study hard.
And she got married in the 50s and her atmosphere and characteristics were changed absolutely.
And she got married in the 50s and her atmosphere and characteristics were changed absolutely.
>>But when she got married in her 50\'s her views and characteristics absolutely has changed.
She said that she realized the most important things are love and family in life, not work or honor.
She said that she realized the most important things are love and family in life, not work or honor.
>>Correct
And she advised that do not give up the valuable time for meeting good people, marriage, and having family for social honor.
And she advised that do not give up the valuable time for meeting good people, marriage, and having family for social honor.
>>Correct
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