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What are the benefits of going on a picnic?
There are some benefits of going on a picnic.
First, I can see a lot of cherry blossoms. I really love them.
And I can make a joyful experience with my family and freiends.
강사 첨삭
Precisely, Sophie! I hope you get the chance to enjoy both, cherry blossoms and your family, this year.-Faith-
What are the benefits of going on a picnic?>> CORRECT
There are some benefits of going on a picnic.
>> CORRECT
First, I can see a lot of cherry blossoms. I really love them.
>> First, I can see a lot of cherry blossoms, and I really love them.
And I can make a joyful experience with my family and freiends.
>> Second, I can make a joyful experience with my family and friends.
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