8.Jan homework
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8.Jan Class homework
2. Make sentense with words.
The four individuals are cheerily making a celebation
Four friends are wearing giant grins on their faces.
The food the ordered remains untouched
The atmosphere of the place is both warm and exuberant.
They are in a fancy restaurant for dinner.
I hate some food sauce splash on my clothes.
I like that my kids are smiling on me
I usually don’t use eys shade when I make my face up.
I don’t have many formal suits.
They are holding a wine glass for toast.
I like the white dress that woman is wearing , she is sitting on right.
The pasta on the table seems to be tomato pasta..
The light above them is so bright and beautiful.
When I am drunk, my face become crimson.
3. Do you enjoying out with friends or family?
No ,not really. Because my kids don’t like to eat out much.
But we sometimes go out to chinese restaurant.
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- Kristine ^^
2. Make sentense with words.
>> Make sentences with these given words.
The four individuals are cheerily making a celebation
The four individuals are cheerily making a celebation
>> Four people are joyfully having a celebration.
Four friends are wearing giant grins on their faces.
Four friends are wearing giant grins on their faces.
>> Correct.
The food the ordered remains untouched
The food the ordered remains untouched
>> The food you ordered remains untouched.
The atmosphere of the place is both warm and exuberant.
The atmosphere of the place is both warm and exuberant.
>> Correct.
They are in a fancy restaurant for dinner.
They are in a fancy restaurant for dinner.
>> They are at a fancy restaurant for dinner.
I hate some food sauce splash on my clothes.
I hate some food sauce splash on my clothes.
>> I hate some food sauce splashing on my clothes.
I like that my kids are smiling on me
I like that my kids are smiling on me
>> I like that my kids are smiling at me.
I usually don’t use eys shade when I make my face up.
I usually don’t use eys shade when I make my face up.
>> I don\'t usually apply eye shadows when putting makeup on my face.
I don’t have many formal suits.
I don’t have many formal suits.
>> Correct.
Or >> I own very few formal suits.
They are holding a wine glass for toast.
They are holding a wine glass for toast.
>> They are holding a wine glass to toast.
I like the white dress that woman is wearing , she is sitting on right.
I like the white dress that woman is wearing , she is sitting on right.
>> The woman seated on the right is wearing a white dress that I think looks nice.
The pasta on the table seems to be tomato pasta..
The pasta on the table seems to be tomato pasta..
>> It appears that the pasta on the table is tomato pasta.
The light above them is so bright and beautiful.
The light above them is so bright and beautiful.
>> Correct.
When I am drunk, my face become crimson.
When I am drunk, my face become crimson.
>> When I am drunk, my face becomes crimson.
Or >> My face turns red when I\'m drunk.
3. Do you enjoying out with friends or family?
3. Do you enjoying out with friends or family?
>> Do you enjoy eating out with friends or family?
No ,not really. Because my kids don’t like to eat out much.
No ,not really. Because my kids don’t like to eat out much.
>> No, not really. My kids don’t like to eat out much.
But we sometimes go out to chinese restaurant.
But we sometimes go out to chinese restaurant.
>> However, we occasionally dine at a Chinese restaurant.
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