82. Homework

Hello there, Jason^^

The \"lap cover\" thing made me burst into laughter!

Many people say that we have to take time to relax, let us balance things and take care of ourselves because health is our investment.

Have a great day, and may all your dreams come true!

ESSAY: What do you think your life will look like after retirement? Use reasons and details to support your response.
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Before a constructed writing about my opinion, I just make sure some situations foundation story.
>>Before a constructed writing about my opinion, I just make sure some situations  will serve as the foundation of my story.
First, I will work and earn money until 70 so I don’t have any problem about finances.
>>First, I will work and earn money until 70, so I won’t have any problem about finances.
Second, I won’t have any child even if I have a wife.
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Third, I can speak English whatever I want to say, even if it is not fluently and Chinese a little.
>>Third, I can speak English to express whatever I want to say, even if it is not fluent and Chinese a little.
 Firth, I have enough energy and my body is suitable condition whatever I can do.
>> Fourth, I have enough energy and my body is in suitable condition whatever I can do.
 So, when I meet after my retirement, I will do travel minimum 10 countries for 5 years; I am planning to stay each countries every 6 months.

>>So, when I reach my retirement age, I will  travel to a minimum of 10 countries for 5 years; I am planning to stay in each country every 6 months.

And while I am traveling, I will visit a lot of special, historical, or mysterious places.
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Hence, among them, Grand Canyon in USA would be first place that I will visit to.

>>Hence, among them, Grand Canyon in USA would be first place that I will visit.

 That’s because I want to see the spacious landscape and, as soon as see it, I might feel how humans are small things in the world.
>> That’s because I want to see the spacious landscape and, as soon as I see it, I might feel how humans are small things in the world.
And, I will go to Bolivia to se Sala de Uyuni, called salt desert, since it looks fantastic for taking pictures.
>>And, I will go to Bolivia to see Sala de Uyuni, called Salt Desert, since it looks fantastic for taking pictures.
After that I will get to Yellow Knife in Canada to see Aurora because it’s adorable to see and it is the best place in the world that NASA chosen.
>>After that I will get to Yellow Knife in Canada to see Aurora because it’s adorable, and it is the best place in the world that NASA has chosen.
And then, I want to see the Great Wall in China, Machu Picchu in Peru, Pyramid and Sphinx in Egypt, and stone statue of Moai in Easter Island.
>>And then, I want to see the Great Wall of China, Machu Picchu in Peru, Pyramid and Sphinx in Egypt, and stone statue of Moai in Easter Island. 
That’s because I have been wondering why our ancestors had made those kind of architectures and how did they make those.

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Anyways, I should keep exercise making my body condition well until I achieve my goals.
>>Anyways, I should keep exercising well until I achieve my goals.
That\'s because I don\'t want to spend my time on the rocking chair with wearing lap cover, which you can see in American movies, after retirement.

>> That\'s because I don\'t want to spend my time on the rocking chair with wearing la ap cover, which you can see in American movies, after retirement.