83. Homework

Thank you very much for doing this homework even if you were tired, Jason^^

Don\'t worry, for you answered my questions perfectly.

Let us not get stressed over the decision we made, for I believe that our choice is definitely the best^^

Have a great Monday~

1. ESSAY: Is it better to have few friends or many friends?
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After I have done my military service, I thought I should make a lot of friends while I was having university.

>>After I my military service, I thought I should make a lot of friends while I was at university.

That’s because I thought I would get some help from them when I have some trouble.
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So, I joined liberal arts class, such as philosophy, humanities for disable, and ect…, instead of major class to meet people who had different major.

>>So, I joined Liberal Arts class, such as Philosophy, Humanities for the Disabled, and etc., instead of classes about my major to meet people from different fields.

And then, I applied for being group leader to get a lot of people\'s number and arrange our schedules.

>>And then, I applied for to be the group leader to get a lot of people\'s number and arrange our schedules.

 Moreover, I did group leader in TOEIC Study.

>>Moreover, I was a group leader in TOEIC Study.

While we were teammates and after finishing the subjects, we kept in touch each other well.
>>While we were teammates and even after finishing the subjects, we kept in touch with one another well.
However, it was hard to maintain our relationship forever since we didn\'t have interests anymore and we had different life cycles.

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Thus, most of them have done keeping in touch with me, but some of them sometimes and still contact with me until now even if we just check each other are still living.
>>Thus, most of them have stopped keeping in touch with me, but some of them sometimes still contact me until now even if we just check each other if we are still living.
Hence, I have learned some lessons based on my past experiences.

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 Therefore, I prefer to have some close friends rather than many just friends.

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 That\'s because, first, I exhausted to maintain keeping in touch with many friends and I realized it is hard for me, second, I figured when I get suffering, only close friends are helpful to me sincerely.
>> That\'s because, first, I feel exhausted to maintain keeping in touch with many friends, and I realized it is hard for me; second, I figured when I get any suffering, only close friends are helpful to me sincerely.
In conclusion, I think, having some close friends are better than having many just friends.
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2. ESSAY: Is determination a more powerful motivator than money?
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I don’t understand this question clearly. So I am going to write what I am understanding based on my experience.
>>I don’t understand this question clearly, so I am going to write what I am understood based on my experience.
Before I have got my first job, I had only checked numbers called salary through the web site.

>>Before I getting my first job, I had only checked numbers called salary through the website.

Fortunately, I hired under an engineering company which makes Electric Arc Furnace such as plant or factory and I was happy while I worked in Malaysia for 2 years.

>>Fortunately, I was hired under an engineering company which makes Electric Arc Furnace such as plant or factory, and I was happy while I worked in Malaysia for 2 years.

That’s because I was able to learn some skills and knowledge to be an engineer.

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Moreover, the company gave me quite enough salary as well.

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 After I had done that project, I went back to Korea and then I promoted with higher salary.

>> After I had done that project, I went back to Korea and then I got promoted with a higher salary.
 However, my job had changed to sales team and, sadly, it wasn’t suitable for my career.

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Additionally, the job always gave me plenty of stress and suffering since my knowledge was not matched with that.

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Besides, I was not able to handle well with English contracts, inquires and shipping from other countries.

>>Besides, I was not able to handle English contracts, inquires and shipping from other countries well.
 At that time, I couldn\'t sees my future life after even 5 and 10 years with that position.

>>At that time, I couldn\'t see my future life even after 5 or 10 years with that position.

 So I had decided to leave that company for studying English in the Philippines for my future life.

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That’s because I thought English might give me more chances.
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By the way, after finishing study English as I thought, I was looking for a job which could show me visions and give many opportunities.

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So, I have been working for a company which is specialized in automation programming even if salary has been lower than before to see.

>>So, I have been working for a company which specializes in automation programming even if the salary is lower than before.
 However, actually, the salary has been increased if I include bonus, benefits, and welfare since I have never gotten any other costs with previous company.

>> However, actually, the salary has been increased if I include bonus, benefits, and welfare since I never got any other costs from the previous company.

Furthermore, I am satisfied with this job since my boss knows a lot of things and he likes to teach and explain something to me at eye level.

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So, I can see my future life after 10 and 20 years with this career.

>>So, I can see my future life after 10 to 20 years with this career.
Furthermore, I went to Malaysia yesterday for a conference call using English with clients such as Germany and Malaysia since I can speak it even if slowly and not fluently.

>>Furthermore, I went to Malaysia yesterday for a conference call using English with clients from Germany and Malaysia since I can speak it even if it is slow and not fluent.

 If I was looking for a job only concentrating increased salary, then I might still get hard time for job searching until now and I am not able to grab a this kind of chance.
>> If I was looking for a job only concentrating on increased salary, then I might still get a hard time job searching until now and I am not able to grab this kind of chance.
Thus, I think I chose right decision at that time.

>>Thus, I think I chose the right decision at that time.

 But I am not sure my story is matched with this question.

>> But I am not sure if my story matches this question.
 Anyways, I just finish this writing since I am too tired today

>> Anyways, I will just finish this writing since I am too tired today.
 See you Rose on Monday :)

>>See you Monday, Rose :)