84. Homework

Nice vocabulary and views, Jason^^

I don\'t think that even the latest technology could replace our libraries.

It is an epitome of hard work and success! :)

See you later^^

ESSAY: Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology is now replacing their functions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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I agree that computer technology has been replacing libraries functions.

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However, I don’t agree that maintaining public libraries is a waste of money.
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First, we can\'t see all books on computer since it is illegal to duplicate and spread it through the website. So, we should get to library finding information.
>>First, we can\'t see all books in a computer since it is illegal to duplicate and spread it through a website, so, we should get to the library to find information.
Second, library is a kind of symbol for studying and finding knowledge.

>>Second, libraries are a kind of a symbol for studying and finding knowledge.

Thus, people use to go there when they have to study for their future such as getting license, examination, or club activities.
>>Thus, people use go there when they have to study for their future such as getting a license, studying for an examination, or doing club activities.
Third, I think data can be fabricated easily by someone who wants to change information only for his profit.

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If someone secretly change report on the computer, the others just believe it since they might not know that is true.

>>If someone secretly changes a report in a computer, others just believe it since they might not know that is true.

 It is critical problem especially for history distortion.

>>It is a critical problem especially for history distortion.

Hence, we must give printed true data to the next generation since it is impossible to change information on paper.
>>Hence, we must give  true printed data to the next generation since it is impossible to change information on paper.
I think last one is the most important thing why we must to maintain public libraries

>>I think the last one is the most important thing why we must to maintain public libraries.