85. Homework

Hello, Jason^^

Good morning :)

When I was in my teens, I did not make a plan for everything TT

In my late 20\'s, I realized that planning saves me tons of time, money, and of course, energy!

Imagine, I could\'ve done something worthwhile, had I created a solid plan :(

It is never too late, anyways!

Have a great day, my dear!

ESSAY: Some people think that one should plan detailed activities for their leisure time, others disagree with that. Kindly give your opinion.
>>CORRECT!
When I was young, I and my ex-girlfriend planned to travel by train for 7 days.

>>CORRECT!

That’s because there are available standing tickets only for 20s until early 30s and we were early 20s.

>>That’s because there were available standing tickets only for passengers in their 20s until early 30s and we were in our early 20s.
 While we were making a plan, I chosen only one place a day without any details but she preferred to make detail plans such as bus and train schedule, cost of foods and activities, and special events as well.

>> While we were making a plan, I only chose one place a day without any details, but she preferred to make detailed plans such as bus and train schedule, cost of food and activities, and special events as well.

She was a person who uses to make a plan and follow it.

>>She was a person who used to make a plan and followed it.

However, I wasn’t since I was a person who was an impromptu.

>>However, I wasn’t, since I was a person who prefers impromptu activities.

 At that time, I didn’t understand why she got stressed while she made plan and why she got angry when we missed taking a bus or train.
>> At that time, I didn’t understand why she got stressed while she made plan and why she got angry when we missed a bus or a train.
Few years later while I was traveling with my family, I realized it why she did that.

>>CORRECT!

I didn\'t have enough time enjoying journeys since I needed to back to Malaysia for a work.

>>I didn\'t have enough time to enjoy since I needed to go back to Malaysia for work.

Thus, if I would miss the time that I planned, following schedule might be delayed or canceled.

>>Thus, if I missed the time that I planned, following the schedule might be delayed or canceled.

So, I tried to follow the schedule and caught up delayed time using plan B when I missed the plan.

>>So, I tried to follow the schedule and caught up with the delayed time using plan B when I missed it.
That\'s because I wanted to spend my precious time with my family since I knew that was never returned.
>>That\'s because I wanted to spend my precious time with my family since I knew that we can never get it back.
I am not sure whether she thought same with me or not. But I just think positive.
>>I am not sure whether she thought the same with me or not, but I just think positive.
 Anyways, I understand both of different views why people plan detailed activities and why people don\'t want to make a plan due to experiences that I have been.

>> Anyways, I understand both views why people plan detailed activities and why people don\'t want to make a plan due to experiences that I have had.

Therefore, I am not able to say which part is correct.

>>CORRECT!

However, I think people must plan between too much tight, which is not too much giving them stress, and loose, which is not too much being lazy, before they do some activities to avoid wasting time.

>>However, I think people must plan between being too tight, not giving them much stress, and loose, which is not being excessively lazy, before they do some activities to avoid wasting time.