86. Homework

Hello Jason^^

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I totally agree that building new establishments in a city or any town could help its employment rate.

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ESSAY: Nowadays all new town planning should include public parks, shopping malls and sport facilities. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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In my opinion, built a new town including public parks, shopping malls and sport facilities might give plenty of advantages more than giving people disadvantages.
>>In my opinion, building a new town including public parks, shopping malls and sport facilities might give plenty of advantages more than giving people disadvantages.
First, it might make some working places and might hire employees as well.

>>First, it might make some workplaces and might hire employees as well.

 That’s because shopping mall, sport centers, and some convenience facilities can’t operate well without enough manpower.
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Second, traffic jam might be reduced since they will not need to use a car for a shopping or getting sport centers.

>>Second, traffic jam might be reduced since they will not need to use a car for shopping or getting to sport centers.

Following that, air pollution also will be decreased.

>>Following that, air pollution will also be decreased.
 Third, to park their car at the side road might be reduced.

>> Third, the incidence of parking their car on the side of the road might be reduced.

 Since people easily get to a parking area so they don’t need to spend their time finding a parking lot anymore.
>>Since people can easily get to a parking area, they don’t need to spend their time finding a parking lot anymore.
I try to find some disadvantages; however, I don\'t have any idea for that… So I just finish this writing XD

>>I tried to find some disadvantages; however, I don\'t have any idea for that, so I will just finish this writing XD