87. Homework

Good job, Jason^^

I think fate is definitely something we choose ourselves.

Have a great day!

ESSAY: Do you believe we can control our own fate? How?
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I have heard some old story about Doyotomi-Hideyoshi.

>>I have heard some old story about Toyotomi Hideyoshi.

 And I think it’s a kind of famous story matched this question.
>>And I think it’s a kind of famous story which matches this question.
He was Japanese and he wanted to make their divided country to the unification.

>>He was a Japanese, and he wanted to unify their divided country.
 So, he visited to fortuneteller to listen his fate.

>> So, he visited a fortune teller to listen to his fate.
 However, the fortuneteller said he was not the person who has enough abilities and luck to grab an achievement while she was checking his hand line.

>> However, the fortuneteller said he was not the person who has enough abilities and luck to grab an achievement while she was checking the lines of his palm.
 Hence, he asked her what kind of line and where it must be located.

>> Hence, he asked her what kind of line that was and where it must be located.
 And she said you didn’t have the line at the middle of palm.

>> And she said he didn’t have the line at the middle of his palm.
 At that time, he cut his hand to make the line as the fortuneteller said.

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 And he asked her that could I succeed with this line?

>> And he asked her if he could succeed with this line.
 Few years later, he succeeded to make his wish come true even if he was boned from lowly status family.
>> Few years later, he succeeded to make his wish come true even if he was born from low status family.
And another story, there are a man and a woman often to meet on the road, coffee shop, shopping mall and etc.

>>And another story, there are a man and a woman  who often met on the road, coffee shop, shopping mall and etc.
 Few days later, they became closer and he asks her a date with this ment; we should have a date since we meet very often everywhere.

>> Few days later, they became closer, and he asks her on a date since they usually meet everywhere.
I think it’s a kind of fate which god gives me to meet you.

>>He thinks it’s a kind of fate which God gave him to meet her.
 In fact, he had already known her before they met frequently and he wanted to show him to her pretending coincidence.
>> In fact, he had already known her before they met frequently, and he wanted to show her that it was a coincidence.
In conclusion, in my opinion, I don’t know whether there is fate or not.

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 But, I know people always choose the way where they will go.

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 Hence, we should try to choose the best choice since the fate is made by our self and it always can be changeable.

>>  Hence, we should try to choose the best choice since fate is made by ourselves, and it can always be changeable.