88. Homework

I think the way we dress formally in the office helps us become more professional.

Based on my experience, I felt more confident when I wore my formal clothes rather than the slouchy ones.

Have a great day!

ESSAY: Some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress, because what matters is the quality of their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
>>CORRECT!
I am making some examples for answering this question.
>>I am making some examples to answer this question.
First, there is a woman who is wearing tank top and hot pants in the office.

>>First, there is a woman who is wearing a tank top and hot pants in the office.

 Because she will go for a club after finishing a work and she thought the dresses are comfortable for her.

>>It is because she will go to a club after finishing her work, and she thought that clothing is comfortable for her.
Even if the dresses are suitable for the woman, most of people who are her coworkers feel uncomfortable.

>>Even if the dresses are suitable for the woman, most people who are her coworkers feel uncomfortable.

 That’s because they don’t know how to put their eyes when they talk with her.
>>That’s because they don’t know where they should look at when they talk with her.
Second, there is a man who is wearing a sleeveless shirt with short pants since he is a person who has too much fever.

>>Second, there is a man who is wearing a sleeveless shirt with short pants since he is a person who has high fever.

 So he thought the clothes are suitable for him while he is working in the office since he will not get sweat.

>>So he thought the clothes are suitable for him while he is working in the office since he will not get sweaty.

 However, His companions feel inconvenience since they must see his hair on the chest and under the arm when they discuss with him.
>>However, his companions feel inconvenienced since they must see his hair on the chest and underarm when they discuss with him.
Third, it’s a true story in Korea, a girl who is just employed as an intern felt uncomfortable with her a chair which was given by a company since it\'s too stiff her back.

>>Third, it’s a true story in Korea, a girl who is just employed as an intern felt uncomfortable with her chair which was provided by the company since it\'s too stiff for her back.

Therefore, she got approval to bring her personal chair from her boss and brought it in the office.

>>Therefore, she got an approval to bring her personal chair from her boss and brought it in the office.

However, the chair is not suitable for an atmosphere in the office because it looks like a chairman’s chair which looks gorgeous as a sofa.
>>However, the chair is not suitable for the atmosphere in the office, because it looks like a chairman’s chair which is as gorgeous as a sofa. 
In the result, employees should dress with some simple basic rules.

>>As a result, employees should dress with some simple basic rules.

That’s because they makes work quality of their companions decreased.

>>Otherwise, they will decrease their companions\' work quality.

 Hence, they shouldn’t wear dresses making the others uncomfortable.

>> Hence, they shouldn’t wear dresses making other people uncomfortable.
Since if owner think let their employees dress freely is not good way for getting good result, they will turn back the previous rule.

>>Since if the owner does not think dressing freely is a way to get a good result, they will turn back to the previous rule.