89. Homework

Thank you very much, Jason^^

I strongly disagree that dating application sites are a blessing for people who don\'t have time and guts to meet others in person.

I have heard a lot of horror stories such as theft and murders caused by this.

Have a great day!

ESSAY: An increasing number of people are now using dating sites to meet their second halves. Do you think that this tendency helps people to socialize or does more harm than good?
>>CORRECT!
I don’t have any experiences about this question but I already know the result about this kind of programs.

>>I don’t have any experiences about this question but I already know the result of this kind of programs.
 Even if I have never tried it before, I already knew that I might not meet a girl through the dating site.

>> Even if I have never tried it before, I already knew that I might not meet a girl through a dating site.

That’s because they only can see the others profile such as photo with shape and height, habits, ages, and job.

>>That’s because they only can see the others\' profile such as photo with shape and height, habits, ages, and job.

And then most people perhaps prefer to choose a person who has good appearance.

>>And then most people perhaps prefer to choose a person who has a good appearance.
Or they might want to meet a person who had upload a lot of photos which showed their wealth kind of expensive accessories, super cars or a bundle of paper money.

>>Or they might want to meet a person who had uploaded a lot of photos which showed their wealth such as expensive accessories, super cars or a bundle of paper money.

However, sadly, I am not that kind of person so I didn’t try even once.
>>However, sadly, I am not that kind of person so haven\'t tried it even once.
Anyways, I think it works kind of good way for the people.

>>Anyways, I think it works well for the people.
 First, it makes people realized their reality.

>> First, it makes people realize their reality.

 A person who has been rarely chosen by others will change his ideal partner to fit on him instead of looking for good appearance person.

>>A person who has been rarely chosen by others will change his ideal partner to fit him instead of looking for a person who has a good appearance.

 Second, it makes people improved Photoshop skills making their photos beauty and gorgeous.

>> Second, it improves people\'s Photoshop skills making their photos gorgeous.
 Third, it might automatically teach people kind of good skills to distinguish which photos were used Photoshop or not.
>>Third, it might automatically teach people good skills to distinguish which photos used Photoshop or not.
However, it also works bad ways.

>>However, it also works negatively.
 First, some people use the others photo and making money from a partner who wants to meet them even if pays a lot.

>>First, some people use the other people\'s photo and made money from a partner who wants to meet them even if that person pays a lot.
 Second, some people also use pretty woman’s hot pictures.

>> Second, some people also use a pretty woman’s hot pictures.

 And they charm guys to take part of their bodies such as kidney, eyes, heart, and something.
>> And they charm guys to take some parts of their bodies such as kidney, eyes, heart, and something.
While I was writing, I realized this dating apps works more badly.

>>While I was writing, I realized this dating apps works more badly.

Hence, I think these more harm than good.

>> Hence, I think these do more harm than good.