89. Homework

Coming from a household full of love and humor, I can totally say that both of them have a significant contribution to my existence, ha! ha!

My mom took care of me in detail, from serving as an electric fan to ironing my clothes, and listening to every bit of my sorrow.

My dad, on the other hand, allowed me to explore life by doing activities such as snorkeling and zip lining my mom prohibited me from doing.

His sense of humor is also out of this world.

Thanks for this Jason, have a great day!

ESSAY: Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. Kindly give your opinion.
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I just partly agree this question with following opinions.
>>I just partly agree this question with the following opinions.
First, most cultures has been maintained that fathers need to work for earning money at outside and mothers need to work for taking care of their children at home.

>>First, most cultures have maintained that fathers need to work for earning money outside, and mothers need to work for taking care of their children at home.
So, mothers would familiar with the children than fathers since fathers might not have gotten enough time with them.
>>So, mothers would be familiar with the children than fathers since fathers might not have enough time with them.
Second, woman’s genomes which are good at rising children in most societies have been improved a lot more than man following cultures and histories; I think it is connected with my first view.

>>Second, woman’s genes which are good at rising children in most societies have been improved a lot more than man following cultures and histories; I think it is connected with my first view.

Most women are very sensitive, careful and scrupulous.

>>Most women are very sensitive, careful, and scrupulous.

Thus, they have good skills at catching the other peoples feeling.

>>Thus, they have good skills at understanding other people\'s feeling.

Hence, it is useful to get information from the babies crying when they are too young.
>>Hence, it is useful to get information from the babies\' crying when they are too young.
Third, fathers are giving sperm only, on the other hand, mothers are having a baby for 38 to 40 weeks in her womb.

>>Third, fathers only give sperm, on the other hand, mothers carry a baby for 38 to 40 weeks in her womb.
Thus, communion between mother and baby might close since they had been shared their feelings in her stomach.
>>Thus, the communion between mother and baby might be close since they had shared their feelings in her stomach.
However, in some situations, fathers are better than mothers.

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That’s because most of times mothers try to interrupt what children\'s want to do if it is not good that her thought and instruct what they want to be since they want to build children’s future life.

>>That’s because most of the time, mothers try to interrupt what their children want to do if it is not good and instruct what they want to be since they want to build their children’s future life.

 But fathers let them do whatever they want to do.
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Anyways, I think it depends on type of each family.

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But I just little bit more agree that mothers are good at raising children.

>>But I just more slightly agree that mothers are good at raising children.