8th August.

Homeless? When I was a university student days, I had a hard time about the money. My father went bankrupcy. We didn’t know what we do at that time. So, whenever I saw the homeless people, I felt a little bit upset. Why don’t they try to overcome their reality? Without efforts, everyone just adopts their adversity, this world is going to get in trouble. To be honest with you, I'm afraid of my future. Because of having the experience about the hard time in my life, I really don’t want to get in the troble again. So, I try to do something to improve both the personnel finance and the career. At least, I want to give my children the stable life during growing up.

Hello [이름]! Yes, it is really difficult to have a future without savings. We all strive hard to figure out a way to survive the crisis. But I hope that you will be fine as the years passes by. See you tomorrow! T.Faye Here are some of your corrections: Homeless? >>Correct!When I was a university student days, I had a hard time about the money. >>When I was a university student, I had a hard time with money.My father went bankrupcy. >>My father went for bankruptcy. We didn’t know what we do at that time. >>We didn뭪 know what to do at that time.So, whenever I saw the homeless people, I felt a little bit upset. >>So, whenever I see homeless people, I feel a little bit upset.Why don뭪 they try to overcome their reality? >>Correct!Without efforts, everyone just adopts their adversity, this world is going to get in trouble.>>Without effort, everyone just adopts to their adversity the world is going to get into trouble. To be honest with you, I'm afraid of my future.>>Correct! Because of having the experience about the hard time in my life, I really don뭪 want to get in the troble again. >>Because of having the experience of having a hard time, and I really don뭪 want to get into trouble again.So, I try to do something to improve both the personnel finance and the career.>>So I am trying to do something to improve both finance and career. At least, I want to give my children the stable life during growing up. >>I would like to give my children a stable life while growing up.