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When I was going to work today, I suddenly thought what I have the personality or character.
When i look back over myself, I tend to think everything the worst case. And I think it the best way what I can do. Because I can be ready to prepare for the worst case.
And it makes me stable. I don’t want to be frustrated or to be embarrassed eventhough any case.
But suddenly, I was wondering "Is it right?" I just worried about the obscure worry.
I think that I just worried about my unnecessary anxiety. I'm now preparing for not the future but the anxiety.
From now, I'll try to focus on doing the positive preparation for my shiny future without unnecessary anxiety.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I know that you what you are doing right now confuses you. But I know that you are going to figure it out in no time. See you in class tomorrow!
T.Faye
Here are some corrections:
When I was going to work today, I suddenly thought what I have the personality or character.
>>When I was going to work today, I suddenly thought of my personality or character.When i look back over myself, I tend to think everything the worst case.
>>When I look back, I tend to think of the worst case.
And I think it the best way what I can do.
>>And I thought of the best way to do it.
Because I can be ready to prepare for the worst case.
>>Because I have to prepare for the worst.And it makes me stable.
>>Correct!
I don’t want to be frustrated or to be embarrassed eventhough any case.
>>I don't want to be frustrated nor embarrassed in any case.But suddenly, I was wondering "Is it right?" I just worried about the obscure worry.
>>But suddenly, I was wondering Is it right? I was worried about my obscure worry.I think that I just worried about my unnecessary anxiety.
>>I think I was just worried about my unnecessary anxiety.
I'm now preparing for not the future but the anxiety.
>>I'm now preparing for my anxiety not my future.From now, I'll try to focus on doing the positive preparation for my shiny future without unnecessary anxiety.
>>From now on, I'll try to focus on doing a positive preparation for my future without the unnecessary anxiety I am feeling.
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