9/1 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Q1) 2 sentences about shopping experiences in the past.
A1) I recently bought tennis shoes
A2) I bought some eggs for breakfast.
Q2)2 sentences about shopping preferences in the future.
A1) I want to buy a new computer.
A2) I want to buy a TV because I don\'t have one
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름][이름], you wrote clear and complete sentences that directly answered both questions. For the first part, you correctly used the past tense (bought) to talk about your shopping experiences. That shows you understand how to describe things you already did. For the second part, you used the future form (I want to buy) to show your preferences. Both sentences were clear and specific. I especially liked how you explained why you want to buy a TV. Adding reasons makes your writing more interesting and natural.
Overall, all your sentences were correct, and you followed the instructions perfectly. Keep practicing by adding more details, like where you shop or how you feel when shopping, to make your answers even richer.
~ T. Lia
I recently bought tennis shoes
>> CORRECT
I bought some eggs for breakfast.
>> CORRECT
I want to buy a new computer.
>> CORRECT
I want to buy a TV because I don\'t have one
>> CORRECT
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