9/1 homework

Hi [이름],

How are you?

You\'ve been incredibly active and participative during our class.

Thank you for allowing me to be your substitute teacher last Friday.

Your composition is great, but I made a few revisions to make it more organize.

Enjoy your day!

Teacher Amanda :)

What is your favorite food? Why?
< My answer>
My favorite food ice cream. Because, ice creams are very sweet. 

>> My favorite food is ice cream because ice creams are very sweet. 
Second, there are many flavor of ice cream.

>> Second, there are many flavors of ice cream.
 Finally, I like cold foods.

>> Correct
So, my favorite food is ice cream.

>> Correct

>> OR:

My favorite food is ice cream because of three primary reasons.

First, I like it because ice creams are very sweet and I like sweets.

Second, there are many flavors of ice cream. 

Finally, I like cold foods and ice creams are cold.

So, these are the reasons why my favorite food is ice cream.