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2013-09-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Generally, I don't like watching a movies. Sometimes I had argued with my wife because she want to go to the theater together when I need to rest at home. But I like heroism movies.such as KUNG FU, SOLIM TEMPLE... I don't have enough time today.so I can't present longer essay. I am so sorry!

강사 첨삭

Good morning Mr. [이름]! Thank you for the information you have just shared. I am getting to know you more. Thank you Sir! Take care and we\'ll talk about your interest tomorrow.

~t. KELLY~

Generally, I don\'t like watching a movies.

>> Generally, I don\'t like watching a movies.

Sometimes I had argued with my wife because she want to go to the theater together when I need to rest at home.

>> Sometimes I argue with my wife because she wants us to go to the theater together when I need to rest at home.

But I like heroism movies.such as KUNG FU, SOLIM TEMPLE...

>> But I like movies about such as KUNG FU, SOLIM TEMPLE...

I don\'t have enough time today.

>> Correct.

>> OR: I don\'t have much time today.

so I can\'t present longer essay.

>> I can\'t write a longer essay.

I am so sorry!

>> Correct.

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