9/10 homework!! (Book report)

2012-09-10 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

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<< Wake up(1)>> Chang Hee is lazy. So his mom always yells to him. "Wake up, Chang Hee!!" One day, his mom was sick. So she was sleeping. So he can't wake up on time!! He ran to his school. His school is closed and Not everyone stood up outside! =(2)will continue.....................=

강사 첨삭

Good morning!! Happy Monday to you :) Now I\'m wondering what happened. ^^ I\'m really looking forward to reading your composition again. Have a great day!! ~~T.Grace~~ Chang Hee is lazy. So his mom always yells to him. \"Wake up, Chang Hee!!\" >>>Chang Hee is very lazy. His mom always needs to yell at him. \"Wake up, Chang Hee!!\"One day, his mom was sick. So she was sleeping. So he can\'t wake up on time!! >>>One day, his mom was sick. She was asleep so Chung Hee wasn\'t able to get up on time! He ran to his school. His school is closed and Not everyone stood up outside! >>>He rans to school but when he arrived there, no one is around!=(2)will continue.....................= >>>To be continued.

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