9/11 home work

2013-09-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

1)weather condition of a particular place:climate 2)it protects the earth from dangerous rays of the sun:ozon 3)lots of trees from it:root 4)to make air,rivers etc.dirty-:enviromental pollution 5)the problem of the rise in temperature of the earth's atmosphere:global warming Teacher kelly! every day I feel many thanks for your advice and teaching. I really hope that you have a nice day and good luck forever. Thank you! see you tomorrow.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Mr. [이름]! It feels good to always see your name on the composition board. Your passion and dedication will bring good results. Just keep going! You can do it and I am here to help you. Take care on your trip to Degu. See you tomorrow.

~t. KELLY~

1) weather condition of a particular place:climate

>> Correct.

2) it protects the earth from dangerous rays of the sun:ozon

>> ozone layer

 3) lots of trees from it:root

>> forest

4) to make air,rivers etc.dirty-:environmental pollution

>> to pollute  

 5) the problem of the rise in temperature of the earth\'s atmosphere:global warming
>> Correct.
 Teacher Kelly!

>> Correct.

every day I feel many thanks for your advice and teaching.

>> I wanna thank you everyday for your advice and teaching.

I really hope that you have a nice day and good luck forever.

>> Correct.

Thank you! see you tomorrow.

>> Correct.


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