9/11 home work
학생이 쓴 원문
1)weather condition of a particular place:climate
2)it protects the earth from dangerous rays of the sun:ozon
3)lots of trees from it:root
4)to make air,rivers etc.dirty-:enviromental pollution
5)the problem of the rise in temperature of the earth's atmosphere:global warming
Teacher kelly!
every day I feel many thanks for your advice and teaching.
I really hope that you have a nice day and good luck forever.
Thank you! see you tomorrow.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Mr. [이름]! It feels good to always see your name on the composition board. Your passion and dedication will bring good results. Just keep going! You can do it and I am here to help you. Take care on your trip to Degu. See you tomorrow.
~t. KELLY~
1) weather condition of a particular place:climate
>> Correct.
>> ozone layer
>> forest
>> to pollute
>> Correct.
Teacher Kelly!
>> Correct.
>> I wanna thank you everyday for your advice and teaching.
>> Correct.
Thank you! see you tomorrow.
>> Correct.
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