9.11 Homework

2014-09-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi there! Good afternoon! Do you think Korean society should learn how to be open to other influences? Yes, I think that Korean society tends to devide up as the ruling party and opposition one. I always feel miserable about that.I think both of them need to learn how to heed their other influences. Concession and compromise are the best way to understand the others and it's good at for people as well. Of course, I belong to a ruling party. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Mr. [이름]! Thank you for being open-minded in answering this question. It\'s really important for a country to unite as one. Anyway, enjoy the rest fo your day.See you tomorrow! ~Teacher Kelly^^ Hi there! Good afternoon!>> Correct.Do you think Korean society should learn how to be open to other influences?Yes, I think that Korean society tends to devide up as the ruling party and opposition one. >> Yes, I think that the Korean society is divided into two group - the ruling party and the opposition. I always feel miserable about that. >> Correct. I think both of them need to learn how to heed their other influences. >> I think that both of them need to learn how to heed each others influences. Concession and compromise are the best way to understand the others and it\'s good at for people as well. >> Concession and compromise are the best ways to understand each other. Of course, I belong to a ruling party.>> Of course, I belong to the ruling party.Thank you! >> Correct.  

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