9.11 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Good afternoon!
What a common gift items during the major holidays in your country?
I think the Korean are stingy about giving gifts. We generally give and take books, wallets, belts and money during the major holidays. Especially old people prefer to take money than the other gifts.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for your homework. I agree with you that nowadays, old people prefer receiving money so they can buy what they want. Anyway, thank you for sharing your ideas. Have a great day!
~Kelly^^
Hi there! Good afternoon! >> Correct.What a common gift items during the major holidays in your country?I think the Korean are stingy about giving gifts.
>> I think that Koreans are stingy when buying/giving gifts.
We generally give and take books, wallets, belts and money during the major holidays.
>> Correct.
Especially old people prefer to take money than the other gifts.
>> Especially old people, they prefer to receive money more than other gifts.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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