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2017-09-13 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Do you believe that heroes exist? Why? <My answer> I think heroes are not exist. Because, I think heroes are only exist in comics. Second, heroes's power is impassible relity. Finally, I think heroes are very kind and righteous unlike real life

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Good evening! ^^

Thank you for sharing your ideas about this.

Well, those heroes we see on TV are fictions and just imaginations

or those who created them.

But I believe that there are also heroes in real life. :)

They may not have powers but I think they have the character and heart

like a hero. :D

Teacher Glenda

Do you believe that heroes exist? Why?
< My answer>
I think heroes are not exist.

>> I think heroes do not exist.
Because, I think heroes are only exist in comics.

>> Correct
Second, heroes\'s power is impassible relity.

>> Second, heroes\'s power is impossible in reality.
Finally, I think heroes are very kind and righteous unlike real life

>> Finally, I think heroes are very kind and righteous unlike people in real life.

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