9.11 homework

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~~Teacher Kate

>>>There are two main etiquettes we must observe when riding public transport.
2. Firstly, we have to speak not to loud to help the driver concentrate on his driving.

>>>First of all, we have to watch the volume of our voices so that the driver won\'t be distracted from focusing on his driving.
3. especailly, using a phone call with our friends with big noise behind driver seat could also regard as bad etiqutte.
>>>Talking loudly on the phone with a friend is also bad manners.
4. Secondly, we must avoid eating food that could occur smell or fragments.

>>>Secondly, we must avoid eating smelly foods inside the vehicle and avoid littering.
5. If we don\'t keep such ettiqutte, it could gives unpleasant mind to people in the bus or subway.

>>>If we don\'t observe proper etiquette, people will have a negative impression of us.
6. If all of people would observe only these two etiquttes, many people could feel comfortable in the bus or subway.

>>>If all people will observe proper etiquette, the trip will be a comfortable one on the bus or the subway.
7. So, I\'m always trying to keep these etiquttes.

>>>That is why I always keep these etiquettes in mind.