9/11 homework

2019-09-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

[Who is the most reliable person you know?] The most reliable person is my mother to me. I thought it should be my husband. But, I think that sometimes I want to hind something to my husband. For example, it can be an ignominy thing or my fault. I think my mother can understand me, or even if she can not understand the thing, she wants to embrace and care of me. I think that love from parents is different from that between husband and wife. Both of them are very beautiful and valuable. But, the mother\'s love is more self-sacrificing. I don\'t know but I think if you ask my mother \"who is the most reliable person you know?\", my mother also says to her mother. I remember when her mother was passed away, my mother said she feels like to lose everything. It means that her mother was the most reliable person in her mind. At that time, I didn\'t understand because I was too young. But, I absolutely agree with her now.

강사 첨삭

Hi Eunice! Nice thoughts on this one. I totally agree. Mother\'s love is the best! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah

The most reliable person is my mother to me.
>>The most reliable person to me is my mother.
I thought it should be my husband.
>>CORRECT
But, I think that sometimes I want to hind something to my husband.
>>But, I think that sometimes I want to hide things from my husband.
For example, it can be an ignominy thing or my fault.
>>CORRECT
I think my mother can understand me, or even if she can not understand the thing, she wants to embrace and care of me.
>>I think my mother can understand me, or even if she can not understand the some things, she wants to embrace and care for me.
I think that love from parents is different from that between husband and wife.
>>CORRECT
Both of them are very beautiful and valuable.
>>CORRECT
But, the mother\'s love is more self-sacrificing.
>>CORRECT
I don\'t know but I think if you ask my mother \"who is the most reliable person you know?\", my mother also says to her mother.
>>CORRECT
I remember when her mother was passed away, my mother said she feels like to lose everything.
>>I remember when her mother passed away, my mother said she felt like loosing everything.
It means that her mother was the most reliable person in her mind.
>>CORRECT
At that time, I didn\'t understand because I was too young.
>>CORRECT
But, I absolutely agree with her now.
>>CORRECT

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