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2013-09-12 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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The antonyms 1)failure:success,prosperity 2)night: day 3)heat: cold 4)liquid: solid 5)defeat: victory, surrender Hi there, teacher Kelly Chuseok holiday is next week. Have you any special plan? My daughter come over for a visit yesterday. I'm glad to see her. This week, I'm kind of embarassed. Every early month, We're closing our sales for the month. the sales figure is not so good. I'm stressed out.It is very difficult to achive our goal this year. because the world economic stagnation is deep and long since 2011. I think that It's very difficult to get back recovery this situation until this year. It's painful duty for me. I'm a boss of sales part in our company.Our productions are dividable for 3 parts.That is automobile,ship engine,and power plant generation component part.automobile part is a little good, another two part is decrease about half percent. Anyway, If I don't pull my socks up,it will be bad result in my life. Actully, I don't know what should I do.

강사 첨삭

Good morning Mr. [이름]! Thank you so much for your composition today. Just continue practicing for more improvements. Anyway, I hope that your company sales will increase soon. I believe in your ability. You can do find strategic ways to bounce back from your sales loss. Have faith Sir! Take care and see you again tomorrow.

~t.KELLY~

1)failure:success,prosperity

>> Correct.

2)night: day

>> Correct.

3)heat: cold

>> Correct.

4)liquid: solid

>> Correct.

 5)defeat: victory, 
>> Correct.
Hi there, teacher Kelly

>> Correct.

Chuseok holiday is next week.

>> Correct.

Have you any special plan?

>> Do you have any special plan?

My daughter come over for a visit yesterday.

>>  My daughter came over for a visit yesterday.

I\'m glad to see her.

>> Correct.

This week, I\'m kind of embarassed.

*** what do you mean Sir?

Every early month, We\'re closing our sales for the month.

>> During the first week of the month, we\'re closing our sales for a month.

the sales figure is not so good. 

>> Correct.

I\'m stressed out.

>> Correct.

It is very difficult to achive our goal this year. because the world economic stagnation is deep and long since 2011.

>> It is very difficult to achieve our goal this year because the world economic stagnation is deep and long since 2011.

I think that It\'s very difficult to get back recovery this situation until this year.

>> I think that it\'s very difficult to get get back and recover from this situation until this year.

It\'s painful duty for me.

>> It\'s a difficult duty for me.

I\'m a boss of sales part in our company.

>> I\'m the boss/head of the sales department in our company.

Our productions are dividable for 3 parts.

>> Our productions are divided into 3 parts.

That is automobile,ship engine,and power plant generation component part.

>>These are automobiles, ship engines, and power plant generation component parts.

automobile part is a little good, another two part is decrease about half percent.

>> The sales for automobile is a little good but in two other components the sales decreased up to fifty percent.

Anyway, If I don\'t pull my socks up,it will be bad result in my life.

>>  Anyway, If I don\'t pull my socks up, it will end up with bad results.

 Actually, I don\'t know what should I do.

>> Correct.

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