9/12 home work
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good morning Mr. [이름]! Thank you so much for your composition today. Just continue practicing for more improvements. Anyway, I hope that your company sales will increase soon. I believe in your ability. You can do find strategic ways to bounce back from your sales loss. Have faith Sir! Take care and see you again tomorrow.
~t.KELLY~
1)failure:success,prosperity
>> Correct.
>> Correct.
>> Correct.
>> Correct.
>> Correct.
Hi there, teacher Kelly
>> Correct.
Chuseok holiday is next week.
>> Correct.
Have you any special plan?
>> Do you have any special plan?
My daughter come over for a visit yesterday.
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My daughter came over for a visit yesterday.
I\'m glad to see her.
>> Correct.
This week, I\'m kind of embarassed.
*** what do you mean Sir?
Every early month, We\'re closing our sales for the month.
>> During the first week of the month, we\'re closing our sales for a month.
the sales figure is not so good.
>> Correct.
I\'m stressed out.
>> Correct.
It is very difficult to achive our goal this year. because the world economic stagnation is deep and long since 2011.
>> It is very difficult to achieve our goal this year because the world economic stagnation is deep and long since 2011.
I think that It\'s very difficult to get back recovery this situation until this year.
>> I think that it\'s very difficult to get get back and recover from this situation until this year.
It\'s painful duty for me.
>> It\'s a difficult duty for me.
I\'m a boss of sales part in our company.
>> I\'m the boss/head of the sales department in our company.
Our productions are dividable for 3 parts.
>> Our productions are divided into 3 parts.
That is automobile,ship engine,and power plant generation component part.
>>These are automobiles, ship engines, and power plant generation component parts.
automobile part is a little good, another two part is decrease about half percent.
>> The sales for automobile is a little good but in two other components the sales decreased up to fifty percent.
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Anyway, If I don\'t pull my socks up, it will end up with bad results.
Actually, I don\'t know what should I do.
>> Correct.
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