9/12 homework

Hi there [이름]! Thank you for taking the time in accomplishing your homework! You don\'t only aspire to be a bilingual but a multilingual as well! I admire your desire to learn different languages. Aside from language- related skills, learning to speak two or more languages benefits cognitive skills too! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

I want to learn Japanese, too.

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I lived in Kyoto, Japan for two years.

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At that time, I had a conversation with my colleagues in English.

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>>At that time, we usually spoke in English with my colleagues.
So, my Japanese skill is not improved much.

>>So, my Japanese skill has not improved much.  
Japanese grammar is similar with Korean.

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Moreover, several word have very similar pronunciation.
>>Moreover, several words in Japanese have very similar pronunciation with Korean.
And, If I have a chance, I want to learn Chinese, too.

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We can meet very easily Chinese in anywhere, even research society also.

>>There are a lot of Chinese everywhere, even in the research society.
If I can understand Chinese, I can do more valuable work in research society.

>>If I can understand Chinese, I can do more valuable work in the research society.