9, 12 hw
학생이 쓴 원문
Now I am very happy because I have a lot of things,
such as I have a nice husband, a sweet son and
good health,
most of all, my family keeps living in Jehova's words.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름]!
Thanks for
sharing your thoughts.
I know that you are happy and contended with what you have.
Anyway, I hope that you are enjoying your weekend.
See you on Monday!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Now I am very happy because I have a lot of things, such as I have a nice husband, a sweet son and good health,
>> Now, I am very happy
because I have a lot of things such as
having a nice husband, a sweet son, and a good health.
most of all, my family
keeps living in Jehova\'s words
>> Most of all, my family keeps living in Jehova\'s words.
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