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학생이 쓴 원문
I love history because it is the story of our ancestors. Old histories are interesting because when learning them, I feel like I am reading a fiction book. When studying recent history, I have to focus on them because they are not as old as I might think. The people who lived through the Korean War are still alive. Military Sexual Slavery by Japan are still alive, and we need to reconcile before it is too late. We can see today based on yesterday, and that is why I learn history. Besides, every story in history has its lessons, and so we should learn history no to make the same mistake again.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]. Great job! Thanks for doing your homework. :)
-T.Gabby
I love history because it is the story of our ancestors.
>> Correct.
Old histories are interesting because when learning them,
>> Correct.
I feel like I am reading a fiction book.
>> Correct.
When studying recent history, I have to focus on them because they are not as old as I might think.
>> When studying recent history, I have to focus on them because they are not as old as I think it was.
The people who lived through the Korean War are still alive.
>> The people who live during Korean War are still alive.
Military Sexual Slavery by Japan are still alive, and we need to reconcile before it is too late.
>> Correct.
We can see today based on yesterday, and that is why I learn history.
>> Correct.
Besides, every story in history has its lessons, and so we should learn history no to make the same mistake again.
>> Correct.
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