9.14 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. vanish - In many deserts, extreme desertification is occuring.
2. vary - I can\'t do your homework because our writing style vary.
3. vibrate - I felt a little vibrate when the earthquake occured.
4. view - One of the reasons he chose this house is a beautiful view.
5. violate - Jane really hated to be violated her privacy.
6. visit - Our family have always visited that restaurant on christmas in every year..
7. volunteer - My sister really like to volunteer so I went there together last week.
강사 첨삭
1. In many deserts, extreme desertification is occuring.
2. I can\'t do your homework because our writing style vary.
3. I felt a little vibrate when the earthquake occured.
4. One of the reasons he chose this house is a beautiful view.
5. Jane really hated to be violated her privacy.
6. Our family have always visited that restaurant on christmas in every year.
7. My sister really like to volunteer so I went there together last week.
>>In many deserts, extreme desertification is occurring.
2. I can\'t do your homework because our writing style vary.
>>I can\'t do your homework because our writing style varies.
3. I felt a little vibrate when the earthquake occured.
>>I felt a little vibrate when the earthquake occurred.
4. One of the reasons he chose this house is a beautiful view.
>>CORRECT
OR>>One of his reasons for choosing this house is the beautiful view.
5. Jane really hated to be violated her privacy.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Jane really used to hate to be violating her privacy.
6. Our family have always visited that restaurant on christmas in every year.
>>Our family has always visited that restaurant at Christmas every year.
7. My sister really like to volunteer so I went there together last week.
>>My sister really likes to volunteer so I went there together last week.
Nice one, Michelle!
- T. Melody ^^
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