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2018-09-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

[What makes you happy/sad/angry/excited?] I have a class to teach undergraduate students for energy material engineering. It is very hard to prepare the class for better. But, students' charmingly clear eyes make me happy and exciting. Indeed, it is fruitful work. I think family makes me sad and happy. I am very happy with my family, but when I saw my parents' self-sacrificing to me, it is really sad and sorry for them. This feeling is same for my husband. When I see husband sleeping after hard work, I feel indefinable emotion between happiness and sadness.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for accomplishing your homework. I appreciate what you have shared here. I have to agree that when it comes to our loved ones sacrificing a lot for us, we feel grateful but at the same time it makes us feel sad because as much as we can, we also want to do and give the best things for them. ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah


I have a class to teach undergraduate students for energy material engineering.

>>I teach Energy Material Engineering to undergraduate students.
It is very hard to prepare the class for better.

>> It is very hard to prepare the class to make it better everyday.
But, students\' charmingly clear eyes make me happy and exciting.

>> But when I see my students clear charming eyes, it makes me happy and exciting.
Indeed, it is fruitful work.

>> Indeed, it is a fruitful work.
I think family makes me sad and happy.

>>Correct
I am very happy with my family, but when I saw my parents\' self-sacrificing to me, it is really sad and sorry for them.

>> I am very happy with my family, but when I see my parents\' self-sacrificing for me, I feel really sad and sorry for them.
eeling is same for my husband.

>> This feeling is the same for my husband.
When I see husband sleeping after hard work, I feel indefinable emotion between happiness and sadness.

>> When I look at my husband sleeping after a hard work, I feel indefinable emotion between happiness and sadness.  

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